“Here’s a polished version that keeps the same points but reads more professionally:
Our stay was disappointing from the moment we checked in. We were assigned a first-floor room, but there were still four stairs leading to the room area, making it impossible to use a luggage cart. To make matters worse, there was only one luggage cart available for the entire property.
Once we got to our room, I went to brush my teeth and discovered that the sink would not drain properly. It quickly filled……
“Here’s a polished version that keeps the same points but reads more professionally:
Our stay was disappointing from the moment we checked in. We were assigned a first-floor room, but there were still four stairs leading to the room area, making it impossible to use a luggage cart. To make matters worse, there was only one luggage cart available for the entire property.
Once we got to our room, I went to brush my teeth and discovered that the sink would not drain properly. It quickly filled……
Lauren